Feedback wanted please :)

Think it needs something more doing with the vocal and the breakdown needs to be more interesting, but you get the idea.....

 

https://download.yousendit.com/B3B3124831D2804D

 

Feedback much appreciated

This one as well, still needs a vocal, and Im not sure about the kick in after the break or the key changes, I just think there's something lacking but not sure what..... Anyone any suggestions?

 

https://download.yousendit.com/3CFE2FC802B9F522

 

anyone?

on the d/l mate. will leave some feedback in a bit

Liking the first one mate. Levels are fine and the arrangement is great. More emphasis on the vocal and a main riff would make this a belter. Try adding some fx on the vox now and again and cut the vox into each word and make a groove out of it. Try adding another riff pattern after the break too. Apart from that it's a good track mate.

will listen to the other one now

second is very good. Not much to add here really as all the elements are there. Prob add a string in there at some point if it was me, dont have to tho. Good work

Nice one, cheers bud! Unfortunately I dont have any kind of WAV editor like Soundforge or anything at the moment, which is why I didnt do anything interesting with the vocal.

Nice to know Im on the right track anyway, thanks a lot mate

TRACK 1:NICE ... NICE BASS N KIK . NEEDS A BIT MORE PERCUSSION AND SOMEIT DONE WITH THE VOCALS (they get a bit annoyin after a while)

TRACK 2: LIKE THIS ONE , NOT TO KEEN ON THAT SIREN SORT OF NOISE YA HAVE BROUGHT IN @1.40.. GOOD ONE ALL THE SAME . 

Cool, cheers man, just got hold of Sound Forge so can chop that vocal up now, cheers for listening