Had a little listen mate and it wasnt too bad... The mixdown sounds a little dull and i think the kick could be punchier, and im not really digging the vocal sample too much, just dont think it really goes with the tune and it is quite pradictable with where its been arranged in the tune... Also is it just me or is the riff very similar to "never lost his hardcore" ??? Anyways not a bad tune mate, still needs a bit of work with the mixdown and a few other touches though if you ask me...