Easy mate, im really liking some of the elements of this tune, your mixdowns have come on leaps and bounds and pretty much everything is sounding crisp and tight... There are a few things i think you could look into though... The first bassline that come in is in my view quite a letdown, by this i mean that its quite a simple melody and as such i think you should do something a bit different with it, automate some delays and reverbs on it to make it more interesting while keeping the melody the same and i think it will bubble along nicely... Also the vocal for me is very dry, i would put it through some mad sweeping delays, have some sentences bit crushed and chop the fuck out of some of the other sentences, the beauty of alot of vocals like this is you can really go to town and experiment on them without losing the feel of how it should be... Apart from that i think its pretty spot on mate, not really the sort of thing i listen to but from a technical point of view you really are improving all the time and you have always had good ideas...
