2 New tracks - feedback please

 
7 months ago
Ben R
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Great BritainBrixton, London UK
Music Style Groovy - Nails (Hard House / Techno)
Hey folks,

been away for a while due to PC problems,

had a nice day 'in the studio' yesterday and managed to make a good start on a new track - 'Krakon'

also uploaded another new-ish tune i did about 2 months ago - 'Scallop'

both can be found on on my myspace page

all feedback appriciated love


7 months ago
Ale X'penn
alexpenn Pic13136 Posts
Saint Kitts and Nevis

Krakon: The track is 'minimal' for NRG dude. Even for the chunky sound you have got going in this track I still think it needs a bit more. The bassline is very good though, really like the sound of that mofo!

On the vocal a little bit of reverb or delay may help set it a bit more into the mix as right now it sounds like you're standing over a sampler pushing the button laughing Good groove though.

The kick needs more presence also. Try giving it a bit of overdrive or something to give it a good kick in the balls!

Scallop: Love the sample fill at the beginning, funky as hell thumbsup The track sounds a little experimental for hard dance, though i am guessing this is more of a techno tune. The ideas are spot on and I would like to hear a final mix of this track. I think all the track needs is a fuller low end, as the track sounds a little flat. This is where a good mixdown would help and perhaps kick the BPM up a tiny bit also smile

7 months ago
Ale X'penn
alexpenn Pic13136 Posts
Saint Kitts and Nevis

In the track You Pig, I hear a massive techno loop in the background of the breakdown. Why the hell not turn that fucker on at top volume during the rest of the track? Gate the hell out of it and normalize the sample. Good use of the Green Velvet samples also thumbsup

The track is different in terms of tune structure but I am always a huge fan of originality so kudos thumbsup

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