Two New trax up 4 Listening.

 
7 months ago
Dan Dyson
hooverboy Pic4936 Posts
United KingdomSouth London
Music Style Filthy NRG

www.soundclick.com/dandyson

Brody and Hilze-Rok Ya Body-Dan Dyson Rmx

Dan Andres and Dan Dyson-Wingnut Wiggle

7 months ago
Daz
dAZ1 Pic24918 Posts
EnglandCumbria
Music Style Propercore
Listening to Rok Ya Body Rmx.

Kick sounds ok, id still add more punch to it mind. Clap and hat work well together, some of the perc could be softer, maybe one of the loops could have a small cut at the top end? The rides dont go one bit, they hide the main hat and the release is too short, they should be pushing the tune along. Reckon the bass is ok, it could work better with the kick but its a decent sound. Lead is nice, could be more dominant but its a nice sound, i think when the tune kicks off its quite flat, another sound would possibly spoil it so thinken the lead, add a boost to the bass (not too low) and tighten the kick with a tad more compression or slight eq. The kick off would be alot more full then.

Decent effort, i give the feedback as it was a tune i made and what i would do to it, more power, more presance.


7 months ago
Dan Dyson
hooverboy Pic4936 Posts
United KingdomSouth London
Music Style Filthy NRG
In reply to
Listening to Rok Ya Body Rmx.

Kick sounds ok, id still add more punch to it mind. Clap and hat work well together, some of the perc could be softer, maybe one of the loops could have a small cut at the top end? The rides dont go one bit, they hide the main hat and the release is too short, they should be pushing the tune along. Reckon the bass is ok, it could work better with the kick but its a decent sound. Lead is nice, could be more dominant but its a nice sound, i think when the tune kicks off its quite flat, another sound would possibly spoil it so thinken the lead, add a boost to the bass (not too low) and tighten the kick with a tad more compression or slight eq. The kick off would be alot more full then.

Decent effort, i give the feedback as it was a tune i made and what i would do to it, more power, more presance.


I wanted some feedback before i gave it the final tweak up.

thanks daz

U listen to wingnut wiggle?


 

7 months ago
Random But Raw
randombutraw Pic1946 Posts
EnglandYork
Music Style Belting Drums
shall have a listen in a bit and leave some feedback for you mate. thumbsup
7 months ago
Aural Imbalance
robnash Pic19 Posts
United KingdomManchester
Music Style Funk and Groove with a Filth Chaser

Listening to Wingnut Wiggle now...

Liking the kick and bass combo, maybe filter the stabs a bit before the break..  Not sure on the synth for the main riff but thats personal taste, like the riff in general, just sound a bit hardstyley in pattern, maybe gate and stutter parts of it to give it a bit more drive..

Overall mixdown sounds clean and tidy..  Good job..  thumbsup

6.5/10

7 months ago
Dan Dyson
hooverboy Pic4936 Posts
United KingdomSouth London
Music Style Filthy NRG
In reply to

Listening to Wingnut Wiggle now...

Liking the kick and bass combo, maybe filter the stabs a bit before the break..  Not sure on the synth for the main riff but thats personal taste, like the riff in general, just sound a bit hardstyley in pattern, maybe gate and stutter parts of it to give it a bit more drive..

Overall mixdown sounds clean and tidy..  Good job..  thumbsup

6.5/10


cheers guys.biggrin
7 months ago
Random But Raw
randombutraw Pic1946 Posts
EnglandYork
Music Style Belting Drums
Wingnut Wiggle is very good Dan. Well produced and the elements are great. Look forward to the release of that one

Rok Ya Body remix sounds ok. Nothing wrong with what's in there and in terms of sound quality, just needs more drive with the main riff pattern. Something more happening at the crunch.

Overall good stuff thumbsup
7 months ago
rosshomson
rosshomson Pic544 Posts
United KingdomManchester
Music Style Hard stuff
liking the tracks fella. prefer Rok Ya Body. Still also really liking the wobblerthumbsup
7 months ago
Dan Dyson
hooverboy Pic4936 Posts
United KingdomSouth London
Music Style Filthy NRG
In reply to
liking the tracks fella. prefer Rok Ya Body. Still also really liking the wobblerthumbsup


should be signed soon.

more info on that soonbiggrin

7 months ago
Hadyn Jay aka squidy
squidy Pic390 Posts
Australiamelbourne
Music Style nrg/hard house
Wingnut wiggle has deffo got the Dan A sound to it. Really like itthumbsup

Post edited by owner 6/22/2008 9:56:08 AM
7 months ago
Dan Dyson
hooverboy Pic4936 Posts
United KingdomSouth London
Music Style Filthy NRG
In reply to
Wingnut wiggle has deffo got the Dan A sound to it. Really like itthumbsup


its always andres style lol

he resists the temptation to go dyson stylelaughing

it was created from the intro we made for the gig he played for u hadynbiggrin


Post edited by owner 6/22/2008 9:59:47 AM
7 months ago
Hadyn Jay aka squidy
squidy Pic390 Posts
Australiamelbourne
Music Style nrg/hard house
In reply to
In reply to
Wingnut wiggle has deffo got the Dan A sound to it. Really like itthumbsup


its always andres style lol

he resists the temptation to go dyson stylelaughing

it was created from the intro we made for the gig he played for u hadynbiggrin

laughing
7 months ago
JDH
jon Pic1326 Posts
Australiagold coast
Music Style deep house/ soulful
yo dan,listened to rock ya body and its not bad but honestly i still think it sounds to much like a reason track,think eq is defo needed,ya perc could do with some eq, on some ya loops and hats add a lil say anwhere from 6-11k and some of ya stabs like ya main 1 that comes could do with some delay to add more presence as someone already stated,doesnt really go anywhere imo but all this aside i dont listen to hardhouse anymore so yea i wont comment on arrangement,but yea nice 1 anyway geezathumbsup
7 months ago
Dan Dyson
hooverboy Pic4936 Posts
United KingdomSouth London
Music Style Filthy NRG

i will sort this out later.

im gonna rearrange some of it and add eqing.

i guess a tad more delay with fit as its got some just with small kick back and maybe 2 step not 3/4.

 

thanks guys

7 months ago
Dave Owens
DAVEOWENSV2 Pic488 Posts
United KingdomThe North West
Music Style Camp Disco Ballads
In reply to
Listening to Rok Ya Body Rmx.

Kick sounds ok, id still add more punch to it mind. Clap and hat work well together, some of the perc could be softer, maybe one of the loops could have a small cut at the top end? The rides dont go one bit, they hide the main hat and the release is too short, they should be pushing the tune along. Reckon the bass is ok, it could work better with the kick but its a decent sound. Lead is nice, could be more dominant but its a nice sound, i think when the tune kicks off its quite flat, another sound would possibly spoil it so thinken the lead, add a boost to the bass (not too low) and tighten the kick with a tad more compression or slight eq. The kick off would be alot more full then.

Decent effort, i give the feedback as it was a tune i made and what i would do to it, more power, more presance.


GZUS Daz. laughing

Remind me never to put anything of mine up for feedback! dunce
7 months ago
Daz
dAZ1 Pic24918 Posts
EnglandCumbria
Music Style Propercore
Id have a field day with yours mate!


I thought that was pretty fair feedback, if it was bad Dyson would have told me im sure.
7 months ago
Daz
dAZ1 Pic24918 Posts
EnglandCumbria
Music Style Propercore
Shame i can tell him what i think needs done but when i put stuff like that into practice its not exactly 'art', more 'GCSE Art Project'.
7 months ago
Dan Dyson
hooverboy Pic4936 Posts
United KingdomSouth London
Music Style Filthy NRG
In reply to
Shame i can tell him what i think needs done but when i put stuff like that into practice its not exactly 'art', more 'GCSE Art Project'.


daz is the master and i am only a jedi in training lol

wink

7 months ago
Dave Owens
DAVEOWENSV2 Pic488 Posts
United KingdomThe North West
Music Style Camp Disco Ballads
In reply to
Id have a field day with yours mate!


I thought that was pretty fair feedback, if it was bad Dyson would have told me im sure.
Haha yeah it was definitely detailed. Good work though.

If the knowledge is inside, it will come out young wookie.
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