intruder alert rmx

hi ppl

 

ive been mucking around with this in the hope i can take it to jon bw's for him to polish the turd ive laid and help me finish it off

 

here's the link so u can give me some feedback to point out things that i could try/do to get it better

 

only 4 mins as cant make the jon the dentist style trancy sound i want to come in after the little break 

 

https://www.yousendit.com/download/TTdHb2VPZ2psUi9IRGc9PQ

think the drum patern neads livening up -more skips n rolls
maybe a 2nd lot of perc
that "woooo" sample that comes in after about 1 min every 2nd bar dont sound right (to me)
and near the end theres a little twinkle of melody but the synth is not right,needs to be beefier.
i think the bass sounds nice and the levels are right-ive certainly heard alot worse on here-onwards and upwards

cheers mate

 

wa thinking bout some more perc will give it a blast on da weekend when im back home