Its virtually there,just want to tweak the breaks a bit and possibly mute one sound at end.
Haven't got around to that yet.
It encorporates all that i've learnt on here.
Oh also the bass drum has a bit too much distortion on,but if i take out the bass drum with distortion it looses something.
So give it a whirl and give feedback if you want. 
I did spend longer on this than others and as say its not finished yet anyway.
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