house lovers out there :-)!! fb please!

my first attemp on a non hard house/nrg tune so had a play about and came up with this track its got a bit off a  electro b/line with a hint of trance in the breaks its not my kinda stuff i play but if some one else likes it then thats all that matters and ll keep on making stuff like this, any feed back good or bad welcome!!

It sounds more like warm up hard house than it does trance or electro.  The kick is way too big/distorted for trance or electro too.  The bassline was a bit overpowering for my liking too and wasn't too keen on the pitched up vocal.

cheers for the fb mate. il have a play about with the levels and try and soften up the kick and the bassline line abit so the kicks not so punchy and the bass isnt so over powering . spose when u crossing over from hard house type stuff strate to sumthing else ul always pass sumthing over at first lol

quite a nice and catchy tune. defo not trance or electro tho mate

bass is way too loud, and yeah price is right about the kick, id get the levels sorted on this one then do an electro or trance edit personally  and at 5.42 it dosent sound right, its brung in like its building up to something but instead just goes back to the bassline, id put that bit in before the first breakdown, use a cutoff filter or something to smoothly blend it in  also, it does get quite repetative, id bring in some different elements later on.

yeh when i listen back after u guys give me feed back (witch is all good cus ur putting me i the rite direction) it comes clear what u saying. iv had another little play about and heres another link. i havnt changed where u said cus iv only just read the post after iv just uploaded file but will go and sort the other bits out in a mo. 

dirty bass hehe