New Track - Alive

Hello

this is my latest project i have been working on it still needs sum tweaking around

Kinetic - Alive  http://www.sendspace.com/file/liyppk

i aint sure about the breakdown at the moment might need re-jiggling around abit as i think there is too much going on

would appreciate what you guys think

cheers

Kinetic

 

hi mate had a listen and I quite like the tune.. Ive used that vocal sample in one of my tunes!! I reckon if I was going to say anything bad about it I would say that the arp synth may be a bit loud, or may need a bit more reverb? I like the breakdown, but like you said, there is a lot going on.. maybe layer it up or down (drop in and out to add element of excitement) Thats just my two bobs worth mate.. i like the tune dude would like to hear it when its finished

much appreciated for your comments m8

i agree about the breakdown m8 it needs a better build up for when the main lead finally drops in

will get working on finishing it

but thanks for feedback m8

I can't offer much on this one mate,i like it

Was going to say perhaps it should break at 1.15 when the riff changes,to give a break,but it dropped at 2.24 and had more going on then.

Perhaps may have overdone the BAD BOY vocal a few too many times,i don't know,tend to find they are repeated a lot on hardhouse so its probably fine.

I liked the sort of appregio feel?Think thats the word at 1.24,sounded good.
Overall a nice track i thought,and enjoyable riffs in it.

cheers m8

yer i have reworked the track abit on the breakdown and made it less chaotic

 was thinking same about the bad boy vocal last night.it is abit too much sumtimes with the ping-pong and the pan effect onit

in process now of finishing the track and cleaning it up abit

thanks for your feedback m8y