nice tune that mate. I like the style you've gone for. I would perhaps try and bring the percussion out a bit more in the build up, it is just that little bit over powered by the rest of the tune imo. the synth that comes in after break sounds a bit flappy as well, its right over the top of everything. I reckon if you chain it to the kick it will really make the tune pump a bit more and give it a more rhythm and groove. you could even have that synth noise coming in without any chaining coming in on the breakdown somewhere, then chain it as the rest kicks in, really emphasise the effect. possibly even gate it as well after its been in a while, just gently though. just make it a bit more interesting sound. totally down to taste for me that though. some might like it as it is.
nice tune and ideas though, would like to hear more like this.