Hi Allan,
Seemed similar to other one mate,as said before strong melody.
Notice theres not much breakbeat in there,notice a few on here Sturdy,etc,do that on hardhouse.
You have got that break at 2.57,but its so similar to other pattern,perhaps a more diverse change there.
Maybe another sound over your main riff at 3.24.I could hear a spaced out piano sound over it myself.
Also the woh,yeh vocal not sure if its fitting the dark feel of the vocals.
Mate i'm just trying to nitpick to help you,basically i couldn't hear a lot wrong with it.Sounded a good track.
Like you said to me take on board the pointers or don't,its up to how you feel

Cheers
Post edited by owner 3/19/2010 12:41:48 PM