new trk Higher Higher High

Had another go at it.

Thats it,stays now.

 

Think i like this one more,have to say.

Please feel free to comment.

 

http://soundcloud.com/maximum-acceleration/higher-higher-high-3rd-go-lol

 

Progressed off the main part,or what i thought was the main part more.

Had enough of it now

Bumpy,Bumpy,bump

The structure is a bit odd for me and I can't really hear a theme in the track which stands out in anyway. A lot of different sounds flying about but it seems like 2 tracks meshed into one.

I like the old skool shots though there are a lot of breaks which drain the tune of energy. The beats are interesting thought a bit of variation would perhaps add a bit more to the tune.

As a tune I like some of your key changes though they drift in and out.

 Thanks Alex.Well it was that first drop,that too me was distinctive i thought.I then just progressed off it. The piano part was a funny one,i kind of slotted it in,as i had originally had that bit of another riff,which didn't seem to fit.Thing is l liked the piano and couldn't decide whether it should stay or go .

Basically the tracks been a bit hard work,and i'm just glad to finish it.I too couldn't tell whether you'll remember the opening sound,the piano or neither or what.

But that said,i still quite like it tbh.

Thanks for commenting anyway mate.

Happy just to dismiss this one,its on my new album,and get cracking on new material.This one was me trying to revamp on old track,and ended up creating a new track.A mess basically in how it was to perform

Some 90's oldschool rave i remember did mix techno + piano together,so i thought it might work.Take Prodigys YOUR LOVE, or whatever as an idea.I am still learning with this progression and more imortantly getting stronger melodies.

Hi mate I know youve said youre not going to touch it now but (and Im not expert on this genre) I would add a bit of interest in there (cut out bits, down sweeps, minimise some parts before breakdown)

Hi M8,

It should all be C??. I double check all my riffs,and none of it was samples(i.e. all created sounds from scratch),so the key thing i wouldn't have thought would be an issue.

Yeh,well i'm looking at it for a bit , its driving me mad.
Pc went pop this week aswell so been re-installing windows all week,and its still not right

Thanks for feedback.I think thats how i generally do it actually,but i bare in mind all points people tell me.

I do try now after learning in last few weeks  to remember to cut bits out before breakdown and get people ready for when it drops and stuff.

Maybe i'll have another go sometime as i do like that opening riff,and feel it has promise .

Cheers 

I think if u keep at it youll have either a: mental breakdown b: really good tune!! Have fun overall

I'm not sure that opening hook is strong enough.

Anyway i'm writing dance/electro next.I have one more sort of Prodigy style rave one.What i mean by that is its got words and rave and i'm trying for a sort of Take Me To Hospital approach,but obviously not in same league as theres,but that sort of idea.

Also got an electro one i started a month ago and revamping an old dance one i wrote.

Cheers.Please keep feedback coming when i put one of them up,as its got to help understand more about writing music in longrun. 

Bangin ;o)

Thanks i do like opening riff.Might have mentioned this about 10 times

Dont worry pal...Its Bangin