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4 years ago
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MELLY Pic1456 Posts
IrelandNo mAnS laNd
Music Style aRdTeK!

Yet another attempt at the production realm uhoh  this ones a wee bit slower than the last attempt,clockin  @167bpm party ,any constructive feedback to help me on my way much apreciated wink    cheers.............

 

Rodg........smile

4 years ago
M® Pi©kle
mrpickle Pic6231 Posts
United KingdomMancunia
Music Style Council House

Will have a listen later 2day when Ive given my ears a restthumbsup... Been workin on a track all nightuhoh, might post it up laterevil.Once ive had another tinkerviolent.....

4 years ago
ben b
benshab Pic6709 Posts
United Kingdomkingston upon ben
Music Style treblebeat & folkstep
faster than my usual listening preference - but i'll give it a go wink. some really nice ideas. the percussion almost has a funky old captain tinrib feel, which is cool - think the samples/quality let you down a little bit as they sound a little bit weak - the patterns are cool tho - with a lot of interesting ideas.

sounds wicked when the full percussion pattern kicks in a bit more at about 2:24.. think it should stay like this for a while, as all the chopping and changing gets a bit much (would be cool, but think it just changes a little too much)

cool vocal break bit, with all the mad percussive stabs goin on

anyway, nice work - the best i've heard from you so far i reckon, still needs a little work on production (fatter samples, maybe more work on reverb, and panning perhaps?), and maybe make it a little less chop/change, but some of your percussion lines and ideas are spot on, as i said, reminds me a lot of captain tinrib thumbsup

haha the end is fantastic thumbsup

4 years ago
M® Pi©kle
mrpickle Pic6231 Posts
United KingdomMancunia
Music Style Council House
In reply to
faster than my usual listening preference - but i'll give it a go wink. some really nice ideas. the percussion almost has a funky old captain tinrib feel, which is cool - think the samples/quality let you down a little bit as they sound a little bit weak - the patterns are cool tho - with a lot of interesting ideas.

sounds wicked when the full percussion pattern kicks in a bit more at about 2:24.. think it should stay like this for a while, as all the chopping and changing gets a bit much (would be cool, but think it just changes a little too much)

cool vocal break bit, with all the mad percussive stabs goin on

anyway, nice work - the best i've heard from you so far i reckon, still needs a little work on production (fatter samples, maybe more work on reverb, and panning perhaps?), and maybe make it a little less chop/change, but some of your percussion lines and ideas are spot on, as i said, reminds me a lot of captain tinrib thumbsup

haha the end is fantastic thumbsup


Pretty much agree with ya Ben...

Bit more tinkering and you'll be there mate....thumbsup

Nice work Rodg ... Defo gettin there...king

4 years ago
Eddie V™
eddievoyager Pic1924 Posts
Wales
Music Style hard an funky
WHERES THE FOOKIN BANANAS???uhohuhohuhoh
WAS ALL READY FOR BANANAS AND THERES NONE HERE!!!!madtonguemadtonguemadtonguemadtongue
4 years ago
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MELLY Pic1456 Posts
IrelandNo mAnS laNd
Music Style aRdTeK!

hahahhha , sorry edwina maybe the next one wink , cheers ben for takin the time there , i always seem to look past the panning !!  am workin on another one now , have to get them fatter sounds !!!  cheers boyo's 

4 years ago
Ginjin
ginjin Pic1922 Posts
AustraliaMelbourne
Music Style Doof'n Acid Ghettotech

from about 3:30 minutes in the track improves with the extra percusion.....still could use more though......needs a solid bass line also to give the track so low end grunt.....like ben and pickle said....work on the samples and put some weight on them for some extra depth. I liked the sample and the end is some good work. But all in all its a good effort and keep at it thumbsup

4 years ago
Eddie V™
eddievoyager Pic1924 Posts
Wales
Music Style hard an funky
listening now!!!

kick seems plenty punchy !! some of the other perc is a little dry imo could do wid a bit of reverb which would fill out the patterna bit more an get it to blend i feel.
like the off beat stab going on reminds me of the old hardcore sound around 96.
the tune seems to lack focus an direction an just gets too choppy , i feel the phrases could be better alligned and a bit more consistent to give the tune a bit more direction!
some nice little tricks an stuff goin on wid the kicks an perc and the eqing deffo sounds much better everything is in its place , as for the bass id have to agree it could do with bein a little bit more upfront an in the mix, knowing you are a fan of the subliminal background bass ill let ya offwink
deffo getting much better !!!
keep them comin!!!!!!thumbsupthumbsupthumbsup
4 years ago
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MELLY Pic1456 Posts
IrelandNo mAnS laNd
Music Style aRdTeK!

cheers dude , agreed on the choppyness n dryness, some mates of mine were round yesterday and reakoned it were to choppy too, so back to the drawing board with this one.

cheers.........

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