Did this track yesterday, not 100% finished, would love some feedback as its the 1st one Ive posted on here that Ive actually done myself. Go easy on me!

http://download.yousendit.com/9DA9A5590420BE0F

good effort mate. Some good elements here and it grooves along nicely too. I feel it needs building up to certain parts more tho, i.e snare roll and the odd fx sweep here and there. Elaborate on the main riff some more, maybe a copy the pattern, add another sound or apply some fx to the intial sound you're using. I like where it's going and the overall sound quality is fine.

Thanks very much for the decent feedback dude

 

Alright dude, how goes?.. I'll have a listen to this when I get in.....

You still got your bro's laptop? Need back to the kick and don't be screaming sending over as they disapeared after everyone was back at mine after savaged

Easy Si! Im not bad cheers dude, gonna bob through and see ya soon matey, just very skint at moment! Hows yourself? You off to Hi Oktane?

Yeah, still got his laptop, managed to get all my samples loaded onto it yesterday along with a copy of Reason 4, and knocked this up in the afternoon. Took me a while to get my head around Reason 4 but reckon this isnt too bad for a 1st attempt.

Will get them tracks to you soon then mate

Glad your well mate... I'd pop through an see you but I'm stupidly skint, have had to move Ollie into the spare room to help pay the rent/bills
Gutted about losing the room for my decks an pc

I'll have a listen to this tonight mate as not got round to it yet.... You'll have to send us reason 4 over as not even got round to stick logic on my pc yet.

Take it easy