Good beat, sticks somereverb / delay on that kind of pad thingy in my opinion. Think you could use some more percussion loops, to add more layers.... I got a bunch of wiked loops, if u want me to show you how to get em give us a pm....like the vanguardy thing, again think some filtering more echo, reverb so it really has a bir trancey atmosphere going on... I tihnk with the bass needs something (i am crap at basses) but maybe it moves quicker, as in more notes with it so it feels like its flowing faster (if you know what i mean) , also maybe lower it by anoctave to fil out the low end a it mre, I find a good vst for basses called Tau - pretty basic but i like it, again PM me if u want details of where to pick it up- a snare roll would be cool after the break i think also....
sorry bout my dodgy explanations - i just listen and throw in random thoughts instead of writing something proper
oh, and please review mine as noone has yet http://www.bangingtunes.com/forum/topic/t99983/